{"id":1352,"date":"2020-07-31T12:25:53","date_gmt":"2020-07-31T11:25:53","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/?page_id=1352"},"modified":"2023-10-09T09:27:15","modified_gmt":"2023-10-09T08:27:15","slug":"understanding-feedback","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/understanding-feedback\/","title":{"rendered":"Understanding Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"<div id=\"themify_builder_content-1352\" data-postid=\"1352\" class=\"themify_builder_content themify_builder_content-1352 themify_builder\">\n\n    \n\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  class=\"themify_builder_row module_row clearfix repeat module_row_0 themify_builder_1352_row module_row_1352-0 tb_969b39c\">\n\t    <div class=\"builder_row_cover\"><\/div>\t    <div class=\"row_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"module_column tb-column col-full first tb_1352_column module_column_0 module_column_1352-0-0 tb_109e92c\" >\n\t    \t    \t        <div class=\"tb-column-inner\">\n\t\t    \t<div  class=\"themify_builder_sub_row module_subrow clearfix sub_row_0-0-0 tb_w5si149\" >\n\t    \t    <div class=\"subrow_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"col-full sub_column module_column first sub_column_post_1352 sub_column_0-0-0-0 tb_35jb150\"> \n\t    \t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t<\/div><!-- \/themify_builder_sub_row -->\n\t\n\n<!-- module text -->\n<div  class=\"module module-text text-1352-0-0-1  repeat   tb_8563402\">\n        <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n    <h1><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Understanding Feedback<\/span><\/h1>    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n<!-- \/module text -->\n\n\t        <\/div>\n\t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t    <!-- \/row_inner -->\n\t<\/div>\n\t<!-- \/module_row -->\n\t\n\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  class=\"themify_builder_row module_row clearfix module_row_1 themify_builder_1352_row module_row_1352-1 tb_wpfz267\">\n\t    \t    <div class=\"row_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"module_column tb-column col-full first tb_1352_column module_column_0 module_column_1352-1-0 tb_5vet268\" >\n\t    \t    \t        <div class=\"tb-column-inner\">\n\t\t    \n\n<!-- module text -->\n<div  class=\"module module-text text-1352-1-0-0     tb_gkdz277\">\n        <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n    <h2>\u00a0<\/h2>\n<h2><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Types of feedback<\/span><\/b><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Feedback comes in different forms depending on the nature of your course. You might receive verbal feedback whilst on placement, or informal feedback from fellow students for a presentation. The most common form of feedback at university, however, is formal written feedback for assignments<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<h3><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Formative and <\/span><\/b><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">s<\/span><\/b><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">ummative<\/span><\/b><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/h3>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">There are two main forms of assessment at university: formative and summative.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Formative <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">is a formal piece of independent work, but the mark doesn\u2019t tend to count towards your final mark for the module. Formative assessments provide an opportunity to receive some feedback on your writing. This allows you to<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> identify areas of your writing that need improvement for subsequent assignments. For this reason, formative assessments tend to be positioned early in a module, or midway through.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Unlike formative work, summative assessments contribute to your final mark for the module. <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The nature of the assignment can vary, but summative assignments are often <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">similar to formative assignments. For instance, a summative assignment might require you to write about a similar topic covered in the formative assignment, or possibly even the same, but sometimes with a larger word count. Given that the mark for summative assignments counts <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">towards your final grade, it\u2019s important that you use the feedback for formative assessments proactively. This gives you the best chance when it comes to your summative assignments.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n<!-- \/module text -->\n\n\t        <\/div>\n\t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t    <!-- \/row_inner -->\n\t<\/div>\n\t<!-- \/module_row -->\n\t\n\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  class=\"themify_builder_row module_row clearfix module_row_2 themify_builder_1352_row module_row_1352-2 tb_czqp309\">\n\t    \t    <div class=\"row_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"module_column tb-column col-full first tb_1352_column module_column_0 module_column_1352-2-0 tb_i6q9310\" >\n\t    \t    \t        <div class=\"tb-column-inner\">\n\t\t    \n\n<!-- module text -->\n<div  class=\"module module-text text-1352-2-0-0     tb_y4xk459\">\n        <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n    <h2><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Receiving feedback<\/span><\/b><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The way written feedback is presented can vary depending on the conventions of your school or department. Below is a link to a typical example<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> of a <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">feedback<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> sheet where the marker provides their <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">comments<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. Attached to this is a marking grid which should contextualise the marker\u2019s comments and your overall mark.<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> The marking grid is particularly important because this is what your marker uses to assess and grade your work.<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> Both examples are from Health Sciences.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span>\u00a0<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2020\/07\/Feedback-and-Grid.pdf\"><strong>Feedback Sheet and Marking Grid<\/strong><\/a><\/p>    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n<!-- \/module text -->\n\n\t        <\/div>\n\t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t    <!-- \/row_inner -->\n\t<\/div>\n\t<!-- \/module_row -->\n\t\n\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  class=\"themify_builder_row module_row clearfix module_row_3 themify_builder_1352_row module_row_1352-3 tb_xy1d269\">\n\t    \t    <div class=\"row_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"module_column tb-column col-full first tb_1352_column module_column_0 module_column_1352-3-0 tb_xotv270\" >\n\t    \t    \t        <div class=\"tb-column-inner\">\n\t\t    \n\n<!-- module text -->\n<div  class=\"module module-text text-1352-3-0-0     tb_br7b397\">\n        <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n    <h2><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Interpreting feedback<\/span><\/b><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/h2>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">As we\u2019ve seen with the marking sheet, markers write a number of comments as a way of communicating what was good about the assignment and what<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> needs improvement. As we\u2019ve already established, being proactive with these comments \u2013 particularly the tips for improvement \u2013 is the only way to learn and improve. However, you need to be confident with interpreting the feedback provided. This comes with more experience, but take a look below at some of the comments that students commonly receive.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n<!-- \/module text -->\n\n\t        <\/div>\n\t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t    <!-- \/row_inner -->\n\t<\/div>\n\t<!-- \/module_row -->\n\t\n\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  class=\"themify_builder_row module_row clearfix module_row_4 themify_builder_1352_row module_row_1352-4 tb_6a33932\">\n\t    \t    <div class=\"row_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"module_column tb-column col-full first tb_1352_column module_column_0 module_column_1352-4-0 tb_9ee3259\" >\n\t    \t    \t        <div class=\"tb-column-inner\">\n\t\t    \n\n    <!-- module accordion -->\n    <div  class=\"module module-accordion accordion-1352-4-0-0   tb_57cd924\" data-behavior=\"toggle\">\n        \n        <ul class=\"ui module-accordion plus-icon-button  \">\n                            <li aria-expanded=\"false\">\n                    <div class=\"accordion-title\">\n                        <a href=\"#\">\n                            <i class=\"accordion-icon fa fa-plus-circle\"><\/i>                            <i class=\"accordion-active-icon fa fa-minus-circle\"><\/i>\t\t\t    <span class=\"tb_title_accordion\">Critical analysis<\/span>\n                        <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n                    <div class=\"accordion-content clearfix  default-closed\">\n                        \t\t\t    <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n\t\t\t\t<p><b><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Critical analysis<\/span><\/b><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cToo descriptive\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cNeed to be more critical\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">One of the most important skills to master at university is critical thinking. Depending on the assignment, markers are often looking for more than mere description. Instead, they want you to engage with a range of evidence, evaluate strengths and weaknesses and consider the topic in depth. These comments above indicate a lack of depth, suggesting that the marker is looking for a greater level of engagement with the evidence and the topic. Description is a necessary means of providing context, but an overly descriptive piece of writing is going to prevent you from achieving the higher marks that you want.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Take a look at our <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/sash\/critical-thinking\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span data-contrast=\"none\"><strong>Critical Thinking<\/strong><\/span><\/a><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> and <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/critical_writing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span data-contrast=\"none\"><strong>Writing Critically<\/strong><\/span><\/a> <span data-contrast=\"auto\">guides <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">for more on the basics of critical analysis.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t    <\/div>\n                                                \n                    <\/div>\n                <\/li>\n                            <li aria-expanded=\"false\">\n                    <div class=\"accordion-title\">\n                        <a href=\"#\">\n                            <i class=\"accordion-icon fa fa-plus-circle\"><\/i>                            <i class=\"accordion-active-icon fa fa-minus-circle\"><\/i>\t\t\t    <span class=\"tb_title_accordion\">Finding and using sources<\/span>\n                        <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n                    <div class=\"accordion-content clearfix  default-closed\">\n                        \t\t\t    <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n\t\t\t\t<p><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cRead beyond the lectures\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cNeed to back this up\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cNeed more evidence\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">One of the biggest challenges when it comes to university is getting your head around a diverse range of ideas. This requires patience, curiosity and plenty of reading. Academic sources, such as books and articles, are the building blocks of a typical academic <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">assignment. They help you to explore and develop ideas and the more depth you can achieve in your assignments, the higher your marks are likely to be. These comments above are common signs of a lack of reading, or perhaps a misunderstanding of how sources are used to develop an assignment. Learning when to reference, and when to not, comes with experience, but you need to avoid vague and unsubstantiated comments and engage with a diverse body of literature that moves beyond the lectures.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Take a look at our <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/sash\/referencing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span data-contrast=\"none\"><strong>Citing and Referencing<\/strong><\/span><\/a><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> and <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/sash\/introduction-to-research-skills\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><span data-contrast=\"none\"><strong>Introduction to Research Skills<\/strong><\/span><\/a><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> webpages.<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t    <\/div>\n                                                \n                    <\/div>\n                <\/li>\n                            <li aria-expanded=\"false\">\n                    <div class=\"accordion-title\">\n                        <a href=\"#\">\n                            <i class=\"accordion-icon fa fa-plus-circle\"><\/i>                            <i class=\"accordion-active-icon fa fa-minus-circle\"><\/i>\t\t\t    <span class=\"tb_title_accordion\">Editing and proofreading<\/span>\n                        <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n                    <div class=\"accordion-content clearfix  default-closed\">\n                        \t\t\t    <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n\t\t\t\t<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cLittered with grammatical errors and awkward phrasing\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cDon\u2019t know what you mean here?\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">It can be disheartening to lose marks on grammatical mistakes, typos and awkward phrasing. Markers are eagle-eyed and often pick up on these errors, resulting in comments like the ones above \u2013 or even the dreaded question mark. More often than not, confusion or incoherence can be avoided by thoroughly editing and proofreading your work. Granted it takes time and patience, but editing and proofreading your own work can help you to identify avoidable typos and errors. In addition, editing your work can focus your attention on the flow, structure and coherence of your writing.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Take a look at our <\/span><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/editing_proofreading\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Editing and Proofreading<\/a><\/strong><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> and <\/span><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/writing_layers\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Writing Layers<\/a> <\/strong><span data-contrast=\"auto\">guides for tips on how the edit and proofread your own work effectively.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t    <\/div>\n                                                \n                    <\/div>\n                <\/li>\n                            <li aria-expanded=\"false\">\n                    <div class=\"accordion-title\">\n                        <a href=\"#\">\n                            <i class=\"accordion-icon fa fa-plus-circle\"><\/i>                            <i class=\"accordion-active-icon fa fa-minus-circle\"><\/i>\t\t\t    <span class=\"tb_title_accordion\">Paraphrasing<\/span>\n                        <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n                    <div class=\"accordion-content clearfix  default-closed\">\n                        \t\t\t    <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n\t\t\t\t<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cOver-reliant on quotes\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cAbsence of your voice\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Whilst you\u2019re expected to use lot of academic sources in your writing, you should avoid extensive quotations. This can vary depending on the expectations of your school and\/or department and the conventions of your discipline, but over-relying on quotes can undermine your own voice and authority. Establishing your own voice is an important part of developing your own style as a writer. This doesn\u2019t mean ignoring the views of other people, but incorporating them in a coherent way that forms a narrative. Regular quotes can be distracting and disruptive, forcing the reader to move between different styles of writing. Whilst maintaining the authors\u2019 original views, paraphrasing allows you to maintain a consistent style that binds different voices together. Paraphrasing and summarising in your own words can also help to reduce wordiness by cutting out unnecessary content.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Take a look at our <\/span><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/paraphrasing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Paraphrasing<\/a><\/strong> <span data-contrast=\"auto\">guide for tips on how to paraphrase.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\"> <br \/><\/span><\/p>\t\t\t    <\/div>\n                                                \n                    <\/div>\n                <\/li>\n                            <li aria-expanded=\"false\">\n                    <div class=\"accordion-title\">\n                        <a href=\"#\">\n                            <i class=\"accordion-icon fa fa-plus-circle\"><\/i>                            <i class=\"accordion-active-icon fa fa-minus-circle\"><\/i>\t\t\t    <span class=\"tb_title_accordion\">Argumentation<\/span>\n                        <\/a>\n                    <\/div>\n                    <div class=\"accordion-content clearfix  default-closed\">\n                        \t\t\t    <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n\t\t\t\t<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cWeak argumentation\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cLack of argument\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">As already established, critical analysis is an essential part of university and part of achieving this is argumentation. In an academic assignment, an argument is a position that <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">you take. The main body of your assignment should work through a range of evidence that persuades your reader towards the cogency of your argument. It\u2019s a good idea, where suitable, to also counter that argument with alternative evidence, but the argument stands at the centre of an assignment and provides a focal point for your reader. When markers refer to a \u2018weak\u2019 argument, then it might imply that the analysis, discussion and\/or evidence is lacking in support of the argument. Alternatively, a complete absence of an argument can <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">result<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> in a<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> aimless piece of writing \u2013 a sure way to disengage your reader.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Take a look at our<\/span> <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/critical_writing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Writing Critically<\/a><\/strong><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> and <\/span><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/writing_introductions\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Thesis Statements<\/a><\/strong><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> guides<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> for more on argumentation.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\t\t\t    <\/div>\n                                                \n                    <\/div>\n                <\/li>\n                    <\/ul>\n\n    <\/div>\n    <!-- \/module accordion -->\n\n\t        <\/div>\n\t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t    <!-- \/row_inner -->\n\t<\/div>\n\t<!-- \/module_row -->\n\t\n\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  class=\"themify_builder_row module_row clearfix module_row_5 themify_builder_1352_row module_row_1352-5 tb_mkdj30\">\n\t    \t    <div class=\"row_inner col_align_top\" >\n\t\t\t<div  class=\"module_column tb-column col-full first tb_1352_column module_column_0 module_column_1352-5-0 tb_cqxg31\" >\n\t    \t    \t        <div class=\"tb-column-inner\">\n\t\t    \n\n<!-- module text -->\n<div  class=\"module module-text text-1352-5-0-0     tb_zoy9223\">\n        <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n    <p><strong>Now move to the next page <\/strong><a href=\"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/quiz-getting-feedback\/\"><strong>Quiz &#8211; Getting Feedback<\/strong><\/a><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone  wp-image-2698\" src=\"http:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2021\/08\/page2of5.png\" alt=\"page2of5 - graphics\" width=\"100\" height=\"101\" srcset=\"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2021\/08\/page2of5.png 160w, https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2021\/08\/page2of5-150x150.png 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 100px) 100vw, 100px\" \/><\/p>    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n<!-- \/module text -->\n\n\t        <\/div>\n\t    \t<\/div>\n\t\t    <\/div>\n\t    <!-- \/row_inner -->\n\t<\/div>\n\t<!-- \/module_row -->\n\t<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Understanding Feedback \u00a0 Types of feedback\u00a0\u00a0 Feedback comes in different forms depending on the nature of your course. You might receive verbal feedback whilst on placement, or informal feedback from fellow students for a presentation. The most common form of feedback at university, however, is formal written feedback for assignments.\u00a0 Formative and summative\u00a0 There are [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":811,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-1352","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry","has-post-title","has-post-date","has-post-category","has-post-tag","has-post-comment","has-post-author",""],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"builder_content":"<h1>Understanding Feedback<\/h1>\n<h2>\u00a0<\/h2> <h2><b>Types of feedback<\/b>\u00a0\u00a0<\/h2> <p>Feedback comes in different forms depending on the nature of your course. You might receive verbal feedback whilst on placement, or informal feedback from fellow students for a presentation. The most common form of feedback at university, however, is formal written feedback for assignments.\u00a0<\/p> <h3><b>Formative and <\/b><b>s<\/b><b>ummative<\/b>\u00a0<\/h3> <p>There are two main forms of assessment at university: formative and summative.\u00a0<\/p> <p>Formative is a formal piece of independent work, but the mark doesn\u2019t tend to count towards your final mark for the module. Formative assessments provide an opportunity to receive some feedback on your writing. This allows you to identify areas of your writing that need improvement for subsequent assignments. For this reason, formative assessments tend to be positioned early in a module, or midway through.\u00a0<\/p> <p>Unlike formative work, summative assessments contribute to your final mark for the module. The nature of the assignment can vary, but summative assignments are often similar to formative assignments. For instance, a summative assignment might require you to write about a similar topic covered in the formative assignment, or possibly even the same, but sometimes with a larger word count. Given that the mark for summative assignments counts towards your final grade, it\u2019s important that you use the feedback for formative assessments proactively. This gives you the best chance when it comes to your summative assignments.\u00a0<\/p>\n<h2><b>Receiving feedback<\/b>\u00a0<\/h2> <p>The way written feedback is presented can vary depending on the conventions of your school or department. Below is a link to a typical example of a feedback sheet where the marker provides their comments. Attached to this is a marking grid which should contextualise the marker\u2019s comments and your overall mark. The marking grid is particularly important because this is what your marker uses to assess and grade your work. Both examples are from Health Sciences.\u00a0\u00a0<\/p> <p><a href=\"http:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2020\/07\/Feedback-and-Grid.pdf\"><strong>Feedback Sheet and Marking Grid<\/strong><\/a><\/p>\n<h2><b>Interpreting feedback<\/b>\u00a0<\/h2> <p>As we\u2019ve seen with the marking sheet, markers write a number of comments as a way of communicating what was good about the assignment and what needs improvement. As we\u2019ve already established, being proactive with these comments \u2013 particularly the tips for improvement \u2013 is the only way to learn and improve. However, you need to be confident with interpreting the feedback provided. This comes with more experience, but take a look below at some of the comments that students commonly receive.\u00a0<\/p>\n<ul><li><h4>Critical analysis<\/h4><p><b>Critical analysis<\/b>\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u00a0\u201cToo descriptive\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u201cNeed to be more critical\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>One of the most important skills to master at university is critical thinking. Depending on the assignment, markers are often looking for more than mere description. Instead, they want you to engage with a range of evidence, evaluate strengths and weaknesses and consider the topic in depth. These comments above indicate a lack of depth, suggesting that the marker is looking for a greater level of engagement with the evidence and the topic. Description is a necessary means of providing context, but an overly descriptive piece of writing is going to prevent you from achieving the higher marks that you want.<\/p> <p>Take a look at our <a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/sash\/critical-thinking\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>Critical Thinking<\/strong><\/a> and <a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/critical_writing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>Writing Critically<\/strong><\/a> guides for more on the basics of critical analysis.\u00a0<\/p><\/li><li><h4>Finding and using sources<\/h4><p>\u00a0\u201cRead beyond the lectures\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u201cNeed to back this up\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u201cNeed more evidence\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>One of the biggest challenges when it comes to university is getting your head around a diverse range of ideas. This requires patience, curiosity and plenty of reading. Academic sources, such as books and articles, are the building blocks of a typical academic assignment. They help you to explore and develop ideas and the more depth you can achieve in your assignments, the higher your marks are likely to be. These comments above are common signs of a lack of reading, or perhaps a misunderstanding of how sources are used to develop an assignment. Learning when to reference, and when to not, comes with experience, but you need to avoid vague and unsubstantiated comments and engage with a diverse body of literature that moves beyond the lectures.\u00a0<\/p> <p>Take a look at our <a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/sash\/referencing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>Citing and Referencing<\/strong><\/a> and <a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/sash\/introduction-to-research-skills\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>Introduction to Research Skills<\/strong><\/a> webpages.<\/p><\/li><li><h4>Editing and proofreading<\/h4><p>\u201cLittered with grammatical errors and awkward phrasing\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u201cDon\u2019t know what you mean here?\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>It can be disheartening to lose marks on grammatical mistakes, typos and awkward phrasing. Markers are eagle-eyed and often pick up on these errors, resulting in comments like the ones above \u2013 or even the dreaded question mark. More often than not, confusion or incoherence can be avoided by thoroughly editing and proofreading your work. Granted it takes time and patience, but editing and proofreading your own work can help you to identify avoidable typos and errors. In addition, editing your work can focus your attention on the flow, structure and coherence of your writing.\u00a0<\/p> <p>Take a look at our <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/editing_proofreading\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Editing and Proofreading<\/a><\/strong> and <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/writing_layers\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Writing Layers<\/a> <\/strong>guides for tips on how the edit and proofread your own work effectively.\u00a0<\/p><\/li><li><h4>Paraphrasing<\/h4><p>\u201cOver-reliant on quotes\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u201cAbsence of your voice\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>Whilst you\u2019re expected to use lot of academic sources in your writing, you should avoid extensive quotations. This can vary depending on the expectations of your school and\/or department and the conventions of your discipline, but over-relying on quotes can undermine your own voice and authority. Establishing your own voice is an important part of developing your own style as a writer. This doesn\u2019t mean ignoring the views of other people, but incorporating them in a coherent way that forms a narrative. Regular quotes can be distracting and disruptive, forcing the reader to move between different styles of writing. Whilst maintaining the authors\u2019 original views, paraphrasing allows you to maintain a consistent style that binds different voices together. Paraphrasing and summarising in your own words can also help to reduce wordiness by cutting out unnecessary content.\u00a0\u00a0<\/p> <p>Take a look at our <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/paraphrasing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Paraphrasing<\/a><\/strong> guide for tips on how to paraphrase. <br \/><\/p><\/li><li><h4>Argumentation<\/h4><p>\u201cWeak argumentation\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>\u201cLack of argument\u201d\u00a0<\/p> <p>As already established, critical analysis is an essential part of university and part of achieving this is argumentation. In an academic assignment, an argument is a position that you take. The main body of your assignment should work through a range of evidence that persuades your reader towards the cogency of your argument. It\u2019s a good idea, where suitable, to also counter that argument with alternative evidence, but the argument stands at the centre of an assignment and provides a focal point for your reader. When markers refer to a \u2018weak\u2019 argument, then it might imply that the analysis, discussion and\/or evidence is lacking in support of the argument. Alternatively, a complete absence of an argument can result in an aimless piece of writing \u2013 a sure way to disengage your reader.\u00a0\u00a0<\/p> <p>Take a look at our <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/critical_writing\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Writing Critically<\/a><\/strong> and <strong><a href=\"https:\/\/library.soton.ac.uk\/writing_introductions\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Thesis Statements<\/a><\/strong> guides for more on argumentation.\u00a0<\/p><\/li><\/ul>\n<p><strong>Now move to the next page <\/strong><a href=\"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/quiz-getting-feedback\/\"><strong>Quiz - Getting Feedback<\/strong><\/a><\/p> <p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2021\/08\/page2of5.png\" alt=\"page2of5 - graphics\" width=\"100\" height=\"101\" srcset=\"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2021\/08\/page2of5.png 160w, https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/398\/2021\/08\/page2of5-150x150.png 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 100px) 100vw, 100px\" \/><\/p>","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1352","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/811"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1352"}],"version-history":[{"count":59,"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1352\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2893,"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/1352\/revisions\/2893"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/generic.wordpress.soton.ac.uk\/gettingstarted\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1352"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}